Đề thi viết IELTS 24

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Đề thi viết IELTS 24 IELTS WRITING TESTThe table below describes percentages of home schooled students in SomeCountryin 1999-2004. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the informationshown.You should write at least 150 words.This table shows homeschooled students in Somecountry in year 1999-2004 inpercenages.The main trend is that all grades including kindergarten is growing every year.Kindergarten started highest at 2.4 and ended with percentage of 2.9 percent with aconstant increase. But grades 1-2 and grades 5-6 show a little different trend, both startedat 1,5 percent in 1999 and declines (declined) a little bit in 2000. Both of them increasedslowly in 2002 and both held that course to 2004 where grades 1-2 reached 2,1 percentand grades 5-6 reached 2.6 percent.Grades 3-4 had a slow but steady growth throughout all six years. It started at 1.6 percentin 1999 and increased by 0.1 every year except in 2003 when it peaked up at 0.2 percent.Grades 7-8 started at 1.6 percent and stays there for three years until it rapidly rised up to2.2 and peaked at 2.5 in 2004.Overall, all grades including kindergarten has had a rise at roughly minimum 1 percentand more in 6 years.This is a good report; here is how you can make it better: the coherence needsimprovement, meaning the logical connection between sentences inside a paragraphand between paragraphs. Use more connective words (Furthermore, However, etc).The groupings you�ve done are fine, but try to use more variations describing thosestatistics: use words such as numbers, figures, percentages, etc. The grammar and thespelling need some extra attention