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Đề thi viết IELTS 3 Đề thi viết IELTSThe graph below compares the number of visits to two new music sites onthe web.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shownbelow.You should write at least 150 words.model answer:The graph shows people using new music places on the Internet in fifteen days period oftime namely personal choice and trendy pop music.The overall trend shows fluctuation with slight Increased towards the end of the period.Starting with Music Choice websites; 40,000 poeple went on this new site on first-day.Half of them backed out the next day. In Contrast to this Pop Parade net sites were visitedby 120,000 music lovers on day one which decreased slightly on the next day thereafterregaining the same fame on 3rd day.After 3rd day the enthusiasm for both music lines on Internet dropped slowly- reachingmaximum fall of 40,000 on 7th day. Whereas Music choice gained popularity, slightlyImprooving to get the original strength of 30,000 viewers on screen, but was getting stillless visiters than their opponent Pop group i.e. 40,000 on day 7.In the biegining of the next week both gained remarkable recovery after a fewfluctuations for 8th and 9th day having 40,000 and 50,000 visiters respectively, reachingto their peaks of one and a half thousand new viewers for Pop Parade on 11th dayshowing a contrast of very few people visiting Music choice for the same day. ThereafterMusic choice gained popularity on 12th day for having more than 120,000 new visiterson web.In the end of the period Pop sites were visited by maximum viewers of 180,000 whereassites located to Music choice were not explored by more than 80,000 explorers on the lastday of the report.(257 words)This is an answer written by a candidate who achieved a Band 6 score. Here is theexaminers comment:Well organized with some good linking devices and collocations (gain popularity,remarkable recovery, decrease slightly) and some valid comparison of the music sites.However, some sentences are long and confusing (paragraph 5), some collocations areinaccurate (slight increased, reaching to their peaks) and there is some repetition (7th day,3rd day, 11 th day). Some words are spelt incorrectly (poeple, Improoving, visiters,biegining).